Hi Shaun.
The first photo as most have mentioned is pixelated. From what I can make out it looks good and you have it far back enough for there not to be (or have minimal) reflection off the bonnet.
In regards to your comment about aiming the bar up.. I agree. Angle it up so the focal point is further up the road and you will most likely get a couple of hundred meters further throw. I noticed the road you were on has a small hill so if you have a road that's flatter it will give you more of an idea as to where it needs to be angled.

Cheers,
Paul